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Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Primary Research Document

This part of the final part holds the revised stakeholder analysis, primary data analysis, genre analysis, and the works cited. 

Stakeholder Analysis
            During the research of my issue, three audiences prominently stood out and were active within the academic conversations of the uses and skills associated with online writing courses for college freshmen: The college freshmen students themselves, the college professors, and the institutions from whom theses classes are distributed from. These three groups have greatly argued back and forth between the efficiency and costs of using online learning modules compared to traditional teaching within classrooms.
            Students feel motivated to use online learning due to ideas of trying newer methods, however they admit to being restrained from certain online work because of time management (Huynh et al., 2003; Kabassi and Virvou, 2004). Yet, results from experiments show that students develop greatly in critical thinking, research skills, and evaluation (New Media Consortium, 2007). However, less social interaction can be occurred and a higher withdrawal rate is proved. Basically, these college freshmen are stakeholders because they generally serve as guinea pigs for these online programs and they truly deserve to get the best teaching method to maximize all of their hard work.
            Instructors serve as stakeholders due to the potential of them losing their job or/and losing the face-to-face interaction teachers once had before.  However, professors are given a larger audience while teaching the same coursework as before, thus expanding more knowledge. Teachers also complain that they must become technologically savvy while planning the module’s coursework – which takes double the time for a traditional setting lesson plan (Zhang et al., 2006).
            Finally, the universities serve as another stakeholder because they are actually paying the monetary costs and must fluctuate between methods to maximize the college freshmen’s education. Larger secondary institutions, such as UCF, find it rather ideal for online writing courses due to the student population. However, smaller campuses cannot easily afford this method of learning and the increase in technology would also increase to the number of staff around campus. . This increase in technology generally requires a corresponding increase in support staff as well (Young, 2001). It was also noted that departments between schools and this becomes an inter-department type of conflict. As well as certain members of the staff being unwilling or unaccepting of newer teaching methods.
            Overall, these three groups truly give to the academic conversation of writing online courses. The solution will be found by incorporating all of the dislikes made by each and every stakeholder, or the most important, and hopefully a better result will come out of this project.



Genre Analysis
            Between the stakeholders present in my research (students, instructors, and universities), they all have share uniform characteristics for each and every source. Overall, they establish credibility, present their results, and use certain formatting to create an effective paper. Here I will break down the certain features each of these sources contain and the functions of each do.
            First off, most of these academic papers begin with an abstract. What this does is provide the background to the readers, whether they may be academic or non-academic, and fully explains the issue at hand and why it is so important to discuss. Next, the author’s state their credentials such as their name, of course, their profession, degrees, and any past work they may have had. It is also possible for authors to leave their contact information so people may ask them questions about their research to potentially better their work. Still, what credentials really do is establish ethos and trust within the reader. Next, is the introduction which states the true purpose of the paper and the why the topic was picked for further research. This also goes into what researchers and scholars are currently talking about concerning the issue at hand, which helps the reader get involved. A planning section is also common within papers as to map out the steps taken prior to experimentation. In this section, authors add their hypothesis as well. Usually after planning, researchers use their results to give a brief summary of the physical set up of the experiment and a wrap up of what took place in the experiment. During the results process, the author moreover provides actual data that was gathered from the experiment for the reader to interpret and take as original data. Following the results is the project evaluation. Here really includes the final summary and gathers all of the data together and explains what happened. The author may evaluate the data here as well and mention how it could have been better by adding or removing a factor. Commonly a references section is after the evaluation. The references is usually bullet pointed which lists all of the sources and gives the full citation for each source that was used as support within the main paper. Using this also gives the reader authors or journals to look into to and also grants more credibility to the paper’s author.
            Above are the common elements placed within these sources, however there are extra subheadings that were used or just formatting and organization skills that were not mentioned before. Within all of these sources and many more, authors use in text citations to place information found by other authors within the text to add to an argument or place statistics. An appendix could be used as well to furthermore list questions for the reader. Researchers use the appendix as a tool to allow the reader to provide feedback about the project/experiment and explain how it could have been better. Another sub-header can include methodology. What this does is specify in absolute detail about the experiment and it even gives a background of the participants or “variables” used within the experiment. Charts or data tables are even used in a lot of these sources. These factors easily portray the results of the project for readers to visualize and almost physically grasp the information stated in the results and evaluation sections. Along with organization, it is highly common for authors to use the MLA formatting but it is also accepted for APA style. Either way, any other type of format is not accepted in the academic community and using either MLA or APA demonstrates a professional setting in the paper. Another final section that may be added to these academic papers would include the discussion. This contributes the author’s personal reflection concerning the data and it is common for the author to use this to apply the project and results to the present academic conversations taking place. Also, these papers clearly only use formal language and they usually keep their writing very concise to avoid bubbly or fluffy writing, hence informal language.
            Overall, this genre uses the same features to display their argument and they keep their papers succinct to avoid the reader from mentally wandering off. Times New Roman is the usual font used, MLA or APA formatting is only accepted, and authors use all kinds of mediums to spread their academic papers, such as in academic journals, actual books, and etc.















Data Analysis
First off, the main objective of the created survey was to measure how college freshmen feel about using technology being incorporated in their studies, if they feel comfortable with the vast complications of technology, and other means such as a preference in either a traditional or online classroom. This was conducted to find similarities or differences between past studies and my hypothesis for this survey was for students to be generally more comfortable with using technology.
In my results, the first question asks students if technology has aided them in writing courses and the average score was a solid 4 out of 5. The next question asks if students feel that their professors aid their college studies and the mean response was 3.5. Third, students gave an overall 3.75 on their opinion of traditional classrooms being beneficial. Following this question, a 2.8 was how students reflected on the ability to develop critical skills with online courses. However, on the fifth question a 3.85 was the average for students on whether social interaction is necessary to learn. The sixth question asked if students were comfortable or able to easily access technology and they responded with an average of 4.1. Students highly agreed with the seventh question with a mean of 4.7, which asked if they felt time management was a huge factor in their academics. Lastly, a 3.7 was given for if students thought their writing courses involved research topics/papers.
            To decipher my results, I cannot still guarantee a defined answer on my topic, however it does seem that the students tend to lean in favor of online courses because of its benefits. For the first question, it clearly exemplified that students are already using some type of technology for their writing courses, whether it be a pencil or laptop, these count as forms of technology. This question also shows that students agree that these tools aid them in their writing classes. The second question was almost an undecided answer, so it may seem that it truly depends on the individual student whether they require a professor to learn, yet some prefer to learn by themselves, therefore leaning towards an online instruction. The third question gave an overall response roughly above average, showing that students don’t really have an influence whether they have a traditional or online class. The fourth question reflected a slightly below average score and it portrays that the sample group of students felt that critical skills are not highly stimulated within online communities, thus showing a good amount of doubt in the rigor of online courses. The fifth question had an overall agreement that social interaction is crucial for academic advancement, which ties into a later reference. The sixth question gave a solid reply with students fairly agreeing that they do have readily access to technology and they are relatively comfortable enough to manage various means of technology. The seventh question gave the highest feedback of agreement and it portrayed how significant a factor that time management is within a college freshmen’s academic lifestyle. Finally, the eighth question poses the response that students slightly agree that research is a primary topic within their writing courses, which relates to the coursework compared to traditional and online courses.
            My data compares to a lot of previous studies and experiments, which truly supports both their and my arguments. The second question relates to preceding studies such as one of my sources, which created an experiment that produced an online environment that forced a sample group of college freshmen to work only within their own groups. The only administrative help students were given was technical assistance or extremely urgent questions with the online guidelines. The results were that students performed well without the aid of a teacher and students actually motivate themselves within their groups to work harder (Mongillo, 2009). Another source created a similar learning module, with the purpose of removing teachers from the environment and students felt more comfortable to work, “without the nagging out teachers about coursework” (Leese, 2009).
            The fourth question relates to studies about stimulation of critical thinking such as one example where a professor conducted various surveys and interviews to find that every 2 out of 4 students felt that critical thinking skills weren’t developed with online modules while the other 2 felt the other way, which correlates to my data because the average answer was roughly 3 which is the middle response. Thus, it seems students cannot truly answer this theory; it would have to be tested (Rendahl, 2011). However, an actual experiment was administered, by a group of Education majors, to a sample of first-year transfer foreign college students. The test consisted of a computer-based program named TANGO, which created 5 units based on vocabulary use, and the results proved that the students’ learning skills greatly increased as did their vocabulary use (Yeh, Yuli, Hsien-Chin, Liou, 2007).
            Also, another source supports the results matched along with the seventh question. The researcher in this source also uses an online environment in his experiment to later bring up a theory of “educational attainment” which has to do with a student’s persistence in study choice, time management, study efficiency, and GPA.  It was resulted that neither an online or traditional classroom alters one’s attainment, however, it is still reported that this factor of educational attainment can really make an impact in a student’s grades. The researcher found it also varies upon person-to-person but time management does play a crucial role on how a student’s GPA fluctuates (Meliha Handzic, 2012).
Overall, what my data adds to this ongoing conversation is that online modules are more successful but not simply because it is more convenient. This new form of teaching truly develops social interaction amongst students in a stronger manner than traditional means; it also subconsciously forces students to become more independent and more responsible when it comes to academics.
             












Works Cited
·      Huynh, M.Q., Umesh, U.N., Valachich, J. (2003). E-Learning as an Emerging Entrepreneurial Enterprise in Universities and Firms. Communications of the AIS, 12, 48-68
·      Meliha Handzic, et al. "Do ICT Competences Support Educational Attainment At
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·      Mongillo, Geraldine1, and Hilary Wilder. "An Examination Of At-Risk College
Freshmen's Expository Literacy Skills Using Interactive Online Writing Activities." Journal Of College Reading & Learning 42.2 (2012): 27-50. Education Full Text (H.W. Wilson). Web. 28 Sept. 2012.
·      New Media Consortium (2007). 2007 Horizon Report, retrieved July 1, 2007 from http://www.nmc.org/pdf/2007_Horizon_Report.pdf
·      Rendahl, Merry A. "Moving First-Year Writing Online: Applying Social Cognitive Theory To An Exploration Of Student Study Habits And Interactions." Dissertation Abstracts International, Section A: The Humanities And Social Sciences 71.7 (2011): 2396. MLA International Bibliography. Web. 27 Sept. 2012.   
·      Yeh, Yuli, Hsien-Chin Liou, and Yi-Hsin Li. "Online Synonym Materials And
Concordancing For EFL College Writing." Computer Assisted Language Learning 20.2 (2007): 131-152. ERIC. Web. 27 Sept. 2012.
·      Young, K. (2001). The Effective Deployment of e-Learning. Industrial and Commercial Training, 33 (1), 5-11.
·      Zhang, D., Zhou, L., & Briggs, R.O. (2006). Instructional video in e-learning: Assessing the impact of interactive video on learning effectiveness. Information & Management, 43, 15-27.







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